I am a Year 3-4 student in Team Awa at Ohaeawai School in Northland, New Zealand. My teachers are Mrs Gardiner and Mrs Clarke.
We found a leaf outside. We drew it and wrote juicy words to help us write a descriptive piece.
I really like how you have described how the leaves feel in your hands and when you walk on them. I like how you used the word "crunch". I wonder how the leaves would feel if you had bare feet walking on them?
I really like how you have described how the leaves feel in your hands and when you walk on them. I like how you used the word "crunch". I wonder how the leaves would feel if you had bare feet walking on them?
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